Friday, 15 November 2013

Outline Paragraph “Happy is Easy” by Nurlita Habibah Paragraph : The tall man with a red coat,blue T-shirt, Grey trousers, and glasses was making a campaign entitle “Free Hugs” in that country. He walked around the pedestrian street so everybody could see him. Firstly, everybody just saw him with his “Free Hugs” sign. They did not care about him and his mission with that sign. But, there was an old lady that interested with that sign. She was care about him and gave him the first response. She hugs that mam. The old lady made some people interesting with the man and most of them gave their hug to the man. But this campaign took bad response from the police. The police tried to stop this campaign because this campaign was banned. Every people there tried to avoid the police, so they made a petition to support this campaign. The collected many signatures from people who support this campaign. Many people did so. Unbelievable, the man got 10 thousand signatures from the people. That showed that everybody care about the campaign. By getting 10 thousand signatures, the man could continue the campaign. Even, the police did the some although they not really interested I think. So, in this video we can get the main point about happiness. Happiness is really easy to find. Without a lot of money we can get happiness just by giving hugs to other. Happy is easy :) Title : Happy is Easy Topic Sentence : The tall man with a red coat,blue T-shirt, Grey trousers, and glasses was making a campaign entitle “Free Hugs” in that country. A. Major Supporting Sentence 1 He walked around the pedestrian street Minor Supporting Sentence: 1. so everybody could see him B. Major Supporting Sentence 2 Firstly, everybody just saw him with his “Free Hugs” sign. Minor Supporting Sentence: 1. They did not care about him and his mission with that sign. 2. But, there was an old lady that interested with that sign. 3. She was care about him and gave him the first response. 4. She hugs that mam. 5. The old lady made some people interesting with the man and most of them gave their hug to the man. C. Major Supporting Sentence 3 But this campaign took bad response from the police. Minor Supporting Sentence 1. The police tried to stop this campaign because this campaign was banned. D. Major Supporting Sentence 4 Every people there tried to avoid the police, so they made a petition to support this campaign. Minor Supporting Sentence 1. The collected many signatures from people who support this campaign. 2. Many people did so. 3. Unbelievable, the man got 10 thousand signatures from the people. 4. That showed that everybody care about the campaign. 5. By getting 10 thousand signatures, the man could continue the campaign. Concluding Sentence: Even, the police did the some although they not really interested I think. So, in this video we can get the main point about happiness. Happiness is really easy to find. Without a lot of money we can get happiness just by giving hugs to other. Happy is easy :) Comment : I think this is a short paragraph but I really get the point. Your writing is simple and meaningful. Maybe you can flourish them by searching the information in internet as references.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Weni... I'm going to revise my writing about Free Hugs Campaign. So, let's check it out and don't forget to give your comment there :)

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